Thursday, December 15, 2011
Portfolio Post
My portfolio looks very nice because it has animations and has very good explaining of my standards. But at the same time my examples are linked to anything due to the fact that they were only pictures and it wouldn't let me open them so i couldn't link them. But i really had good examples to show for each of my standards. And lastly it really explained graphically how I felt on how I approached the standards.
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1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
ReplyDeleteI really liked your coming of age essay because it really proved to me how you really matured from death of your grandfather and became to the young man you are now. It also explains of how he impacted your life by how he mentored you to be a better baseball player, a better student, and just being a better person in life.
2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
I really liked the graphics that you used and having corresponding of color on your slide layouts. Also the use of your graphic knowledge such as making the changing of pages. I would want you to improve on making the pictures bigger so it can be accessible to read and see.
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency) do you feel was most successful for me?
I think that the most successful writing trait to me was your voice due to the evidence you gave and shared and also the explaining of your view on what the standards means. Also because it really shows to me that you really care for what you write instead of just making things up.
4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
I would like you to improve on your sentence fluency because you kind of had a hard time explaining it to me and you could tell in your examples because they weren't really fluent.
- Wesley Sakai