Hey Brayton, Nice draft for your coming of age poster. I like your theme of the poster that life and coming of age is like a hike and how we are always improving as we get older and mature. I also like how you tried to make it that each step has a trait that we improve on as we come of age. However I think you could improve on some things though. The last word in black, it is kind of hard to see since it sort of blends in with the stairs so I recommend changing the color of stroke it so it is easier to see. Also I would try and make some the words bigger like reliable and responsibility. Lastly I recommend making your title bigger since it bends in with your other traits on the step and at first glance I couldn't find your title. Or you could put the title on the top so people know it is your title since you want it to stand out. One more thing make sure you put a picture of yourself on your poster. Other than that can't wait to see the final poster.
Hey Brayton,
ReplyDeleteNice draft for your coming of age poster. I like your theme of the poster that life and coming of age is like a hike and how we are always improving as we get older and mature. I also like how you tried to make it that each step has a trait that we improve on as we come of age. However I think you could improve on some things though. The last word in black, it is kind of hard to see since it sort of blends in with the stairs so I recommend changing the color of stroke it so it is easier to see. Also I would try and make some the words bigger like reliable and responsibility. Lastly I recommend making your title bigger since it bends in with your other traits on the step and at first glance I couldn't find your title. Or you could put the title on the top so people know it is your title since you want it to stand out. One more thing make sure you put a picture of yourself on your poster. Other than that can't wait to see the final poster.
-Mikayla Domingo