Writing Portfolio

1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? I really liked the roots and recipe project because it was an awesome opportunity to present things about culture.Also it gave me an opportunity to show our favorite food about our culture.
2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on? I feel that my photos brought alot of visual things to my presentation.I would like to improve on the ideas the most because it would keep the reader into my essay better.
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? The trait that was most successful to me was the word choice because coming up with sensory details is hard but when you get the right one your essay would be veery good.
4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? The trait I would most like to improve on is the ideas trait because it helps attract the reader more and to explain good details for them.