Writing Portfolio

1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? I really liked the roots and recipe project because it was an awesome opportunity to present things about culture.Also it gave me an opportunity to show our favorite food about our culture.
2. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on? I feel that my photos brought alot of visual things to my presentation.I would like to improve on the ideas the most because it would keep the reader into my essay better.
3. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me? The trait that was most successful to me was the word choice because coming up with sensory details is hard but when you get the right one your essay would be veery good.
4. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester? The trait I would most like to improve on is the ideas trait because it helps attract the reader more and to explain good details for them.

OR Card for 2nd quarter

I think I deserve a 4. I really put alot of emphasis on the main conflict and the resolution. Also it is a really good example of how I can put photoshop into my project. Also I can get a quote relevant to the book.

Writing Portfolio Parent

What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?   The piece of writing that I liked best in your portfolio would be that of your descriptions of the events that was referenced within the examples.  It seems to have reflected in writing what you were feeling; under normal circumstances these are not usually shown in your everyday interaction.

What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?  The part of your portfolio that I liked was your presentation on the various slides and your ability to take the time to prepare each slide and reflect your thoughts.  I would like to see that you avoid waiting and putting things off until the deadline date.  There may be unforeseen circumstances that come along that will prevent last minute submissions of your work and to avoid this, taking the time to prepare ahead of time will help out in these circumstances.

Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?  I believe that the voice would be the most successful for you.
 
Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?  I would like to see you improve on taking your time when preparing and completing your assignments.  Choosing words carefully when preparing writing assignments will help you to expand your vocabulary.